Date: 2007-10-30 11:49 am (UTC)
I love Dylan. she's got a strong personality without overpowering Gale completely

That's cool. It does need to be believable that he's been with her for a year.

Randy is clearly in love with Gale

I want to call it a crush, as they've only known each other a week or two at this point, but I reckon that both of them experienced a certain amount of "at first sight." :)

maybe she's just too arrogant to think that Gale would ever leave her for another MAN?

Yeah. She is a bit arrogant, and selfish. But you can't really blame her for not seeing the danger here. Most women in her situation wouldn't.

I am not sure that she's in love with Gale

I'm actually going to have to think on that one. I know I decided that's not something they say (ILY). But I feel like she probably thinks she is anyway. Maybe they love each other but aren't in love...

can't wait to see what you're going to do with her when G&R falls in love (they had bloody better!!!!), and doesn't want her part of the equation anymore!

Yeah, I'm gonna write this whole story and then they *don't* fall in love... HA! So, yes, yes, they very much do :) She might realize it almost before they do.

LOL is this the character you were going for?

I think so? I'll take her, either way, lol! Thank you, dear!


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