http://eileen-donovan.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] eileen-donovan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wouldbedorothy 2009-06-04 05:18 am (UTC)

That was lovely! I love young!Justin with all his naive hopes and dreams, some which I don't think he ever gives up. I love how he can read Brian so well, yet still wonders if he'll ever hear those three precious words from him. And I love how you allude to Brian moving closer to that line.

Very nice! I loved it! :)
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