Aww, thanks for the mention lady! Read it again, and it's still breathtakingly amazing.
I decided to post my review here too. :D
Woah. I feel like I need a second to, like, breathe.
You jerked off that night squeezing your dick with one hand and pressing into the bruise on your jaw with the other.You jerked off that night squeezing your dick with one hand and pressing into the bruise on your jaw with the other.
Somehow that is more disturbing than the ending.
I don't know if you've ever read anything by Stephen King (I'm specifically thinking of The Shining) but you used the italics with brilliance that reminded me of that book. The way they're little whispers of Truth that Hobbs can't ignore.
That’s when you gave up baseball for football, but twelve years later you’d do your damnedest to prove him wrong twice, wouldn’t you? Prove you knew how to swing a bat and hit. Prove the fag wasn’t you.
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I decided to post my review here too. :D
Woah. I feel like I need a second to, like, breathe.
You jerked off that night squeezing your dick with one hand and pressing into the bruise on your jaw with the other.You jerked off that night squeezing your dick with one hand and pressing into the bruise on your jaw with the other.
Somehow that is more disturbing than the ending.
I don't know if you've ever read anything by Stephen King (I'm specifically thinking of The Shining) but you used the italics with brilliance that reminded me of that book. The way they're little whispers of Truth that Hobbs can't ignore.
That’s when you gave up baseball for football, but twelve years later you’d do your damnedest to prove him wrong twice, wouldn’t you? Prove you knew how to swing a bat and hit. Prove the fag wasn’t you.
Fuck, that part is too perfect.