15-18-31... a gale/randy double drabble

[wouldbedorothy]

Title: 15-18-31
Author: wouldbedorothy  (AHS)
Rating: PGish
Series/Sequel: just this
Summary: 200 words of Gale pov.
Author's Notes: Had this thought last night and tried to scribble key words as I drove, lol.  Maybe just a teensy bit sad-ish.  rromantic  thanks for preview praise ;)
Disclaimer: I don't know Gale or Randy, so anything I say... including any names... is obviously made up in my rather odd head.

15-18-31
by AHS

The cool thing about realizing you’re attracted to girls *and* boys is that you get to lose your virginity twice.

I lost mine three times.

When I was 15, to a girl named Marie Brantley, who my mother foolishly thought was a good Christian.

When I was 18, to a boy named Ryan Parker. Freshman lab partner. Experimenting went beyond the classroom.

And when I was 31, I lost it for good… to Randy Harrison.

It wasn’t until the third that I realized the “twice” hadn’t really been that cool.

He was not impressed when I told him… in bed, still wrapped around him… weeks into whatever it was we were doing. Rather, he was instantly sympathetic.

“You poor thing. Losing your virginity is fucking traumatic. I can’t imagine having to do it more than once.”

I laughed… and then cried… and then laughed at that. He just held me closer.

It was different with him, always. Because, even when I fucked him, I felt penetrated.

Scared me, but I fucking miss it.

I place the numbers… 15-right... 18-left... 31-right... Unlock… Stare at the picture of us.

I’ve run out of firsts. But someday… I want Randy for my last.

 

Comments

[kari77.livejournal.com]

... WOW ...

That's ... Don't know why but this one hit me square in the chest. Very intense.

Great job! :-)

[libra2.livejournal.com]

Oops, I axi-den-ollie posted in G/R... so, here's a copy for you :)

:o OMG!

"It was different with him, always. Because, even when I fucked him, I felt penetrated."
*clutches heart*

"I place the numbers… 15-right... 18-left... 31-right... Unlock… Stare at the picture of us."
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!

Teensy bit sad, yeah... *eyes about to spill with tears* Shortest fic I've ever read, brilliant none the less!!!!!!!!! *hugs*
(I don't usually do drabbles but fortunately I clicked before noticing)

[we-dreamerz.livejournal.com]

Oh.... Girl you hit me in the heart with this one....

Because, even when I fucked him, I felt penetrated.

[rromantic.livejournal.com]

I lost mine three times. Oh, yummie! if it starts like this…

…Experimenting went beyond the classroom. beauty… lol

And when I was 31, I lost it for good… to Randy Harrison. aaawwww…

It was different with him, always. Because, even when I fucked him, I felt penetrated. bbbrrrrr…. Thousands and thousands of little hairs all standing on end! Yikes. Awesome.

Scared me, but I fucking miss it. I do NOT like the sound of this!

I place the numbers… 15-right… title... 18-left… got it, I think ... 31-right …3 virginity-loose attempts-thingies ages ... Unlock… Stare at the picture of us. Uh-oh.

I’ve run out of firsts. But someday… I want Randy for my last. *screeching tires, back-up, reread*

…he?! (which is African for *completely and utterly bewildered, way past the proverbial caught in oncoming headlights*)

...You mean they’re not together?! :((

…this is why, once again, I say “you make them sparkle.” Both words and GR. It’s absolutely stunning…!!

[iamastarin2006.livejournal.com]

Ok we need to make sure that he is his last....

Hugs : kaylin

[jans-intentions.livejournal.com]

Oh, love that!

It was different with him, always. Because, even when I fucked him, I felt penetrated.


Great descriptor.

[sandid.livejournal.com]

YOU are my drabble hero.

[bbmaniac.livejournal.com]

Now, even with numbers... :-O... you and your creativity never seizes to amaze me... as always, late... very late, too late. And what for? to tell you that you made me cry? you already know that. That I feel like Gale wanting Randy to be his last? you can imagine that, too. That you are wonderful and inspiring and a relief to my poor heart? you BETTER know that ... so, again, nothing new and nothing that you didn't know already. I'm in an "original" mood, as you can see… so, yeah, you have, had and will have that power over me: to make me cry my eyes out in 100 words.

THANKS A!

[akintay.livejournal.com]

I'm always ridiculously happy when I see you posted a new fic! And this one was beautiful. The last two lines made me want to cry (in a good way)...I want Randy to be Gale's last, too!
Love & hugs!

[sixfullerst.livejournal.com]

Everyone has already quoted "that" line, the one that made me stop breathing for a millisecond. So much in so few words; just beautiful.

[cay-wylde.livejournal.com]

Short, intense - wonderful!

Thank you for another little masterpiece.